A focused, well-written resume is essential to a successful job search. But a strong cover letter can make an even bigger difference in whether you get called in to interview for a job. Like the resume, the cover letter serves as a sales tool for your skills and experience, and the value you can bring to an employer. In fact, think of your cover letter as an advertisement for a new car. You need to sell the car fast, so what will make readers interested enough to call? Would You Buy This Car? Car makers don’t just create one advertisement that says, "Our vehicles have four wheels, an engine, and seats!" An ad for a car identifies the features that appeal to potential buyers of that one specific vehicle. Some ads emphasize towing capacity; others talk about gas mileage; others tout safety features. They target the needs of the specific buyers of each type of vehicle. Like a car advertisement, your cover letter should target the employer’s needs for the specific job you want. It should differentiate you from the crowd, and call attention to the features in your resume that are most relevant for the hiring manager. If your cover letter speaks to the hiring manager’s needs, he or she will take the next steps and read your resume, and if all goes well, call you in for an interview. The ideal cover letter specifically emphasizes your fit for the position and how your unique skills and experience can help the employer. Characteristics of Good and Bad Cover Letters
Gets to the point early in the first paragraph. Contains mostly crisp, concise sentences (a couple longer ones are OK). Presents skills and accomplishments in bulleted format for ease of reading. Omits needless words.
Has long, detailed, rambling sentences that don’t grab attention. Hides your skills and accomplishments in paragraphs among less-relevant details.
Answers the employer’s top question: “What can you [job seeker] do for my business?” Highlights your most relevant qualifications. Focuses on how your skills, background, and accomplishments align with the employer’s needs. Contains exact keywords and phrases taken from the actual job description. Points out relevant information that is well supported in the resume. Expresses confidence without being arrogant.
Focuses on your needs rather than the employer’s (“This job is just what I’m looking for – creativity, flexibility, and a short commute.”). Simply repeats details that are in the resume. Assumes the reader will notice similarities between keywords in the job description and “similar” phrasing in the letter. Introduces information that is not substantiated in the resume. Uses arrogant-sounding “puffery” (e.g., “Look no further, I am a perfect fit for the job.”).
Has one or more spelling or grammatical errors.
Fits neatly within one page, or is well balanced between two pages. Includes substantial white space for visual appeal and note-taking.
Expresses thanks to the reader. Emphasizes your strong interest in the position. Announces when you will follow up.
Fails to acknowledge the reader’s time. Leaves the reader uncertain whether you really care about the job. Puts the next step in the employer’s hands, not yours.
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